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I want a perfect body, I want a perfect soul...
2012-05-15 08:12 pm (UTC)
I'm here to say I love your work. This story is just great! I'm a big fun of yours "Forgive Us Our Transgressions", but I think it's going to be better. Your Charles is a little bit cabbage, but he is also extremely adorable, so it is easy to forgive him. Seriously: “Well, I said Emma’s name, and she said it back. You know, happily”. How was he supposed to know about Emma? Erik never mentioned her. XD But I can understand him: who can think properly when Micha... I mean Erik is around? Nobody, unless they're blind. And deaf. Speaking of the devil, I adore your Erik. He is just perfect! The way he speaks, the way he deals with Lorna (their relationship is great!) and eventually the way he is around Charles: especially in last chapter. I thought it was going to take months before they say or do something in right direction! Thank you. I like when our boys are actually boys and know what they want. I just can't wait to read next part!
Oh, and I have to say it: I really don't like your Moira, but I realized lately I would say exactly same things if I was in her shoes. Nasty feeling.
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