Flailing and flailing and flailing. Aaaaah! But as cliffhangers go, fabulously tense :D
I love your writing. It works so well here, the tension of real/not real between the two of them and how this affects their relationship. I'm excited to see what happens in the final chapter.
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Date: 2012-01-31 09:03 pm (UTC)I love your writing. It works so well here, the tension of real/not real between the two of them and how this affects their relationship. I'm excited to see what happens in the final chapter.